The Heat of the Night (revised)

I know that some of you have read this already but I received an email about it from "someone that was there," ;) and that read the original version of this. He said that I needed to post the whole story! So I am revising the Post... The original is too hot for general audiances so this is my revision! Enjoy!!!


I spent a lot of summer nights at my aunts house growing up. We would stay up late playing cards and talking with friends. When the nights got too long, we would all just crash where ever we saw fit. I usually slept on the sun porch because of the breeze that blew through there and the sounds that echoed in the night. The nights were hot and sticky and there never seemed to be any relief in sight, I would lay melting on the most comfortable patio sofa with just a light sheet draped over me. Every night was the same, we would fight off the heat of the night with cold drinks, good friends, food, and laughter. At the end of the night we would all retreat to our favorite spots and try to stay cool until morning.

One night after everyone had gone to sleep, I was laying in my favorite spot almost asleep when I heard the door squeak. I looked up to see who had come out on the porch, I saw one of my cousins friends standing a few feet from me looking out the window. He was standing silent in the moonlight, the glow outlining his body as he stood there in thought. He ran his fingers through his hair and I could see every ripple of his bare chest. He leaned against the door frame and took a drink of his soda. I asked " Mind if I have a drink of that?"

He jumped and spilled his soda down the front of himself. I laughed. "You startled me!"

"I can see that." I said, as I got up and walked over to him.

I picked up a towel from the side table and started to dry the soda, we laughed and he took the towel and said "I'm a little clumsy!"

I told him "That's okay as long as you left me some!" He handed me the bottle with a smile that cooled the air.

We passed the bottle back and forth as we talked. He had hoped I would be awake because we never get to talk alone and I had never really noticed him before. He likes the heat and I don't care for it. I'm a country girl and he wants out of this town. We talked until morning and then retreat to our spots before anyone woke up.

The next night while playing cards I noticed something I hadn't before...There was a familiar face looking across the table at me! We played into the night and as usual everyone retreated to our spots to settle in for the night. About an hour later, I heard the door squeak and I looked up to see him standing in the moonlight again. He was walking towards me with two ice cold sodas. He said "I thought you might need something cold to drink!"

He was standing there in shorts, no shirts, his skin glistening in the moonlight, offering me something cold to drink. "Thanks, that's just what I needed right now." I replied with a sigh, as I took the bottle of soda from his hand. "I need relief from this heat I think I'm going to melt."

"I know, that's why I come out here, for the breeze. It's way too hot in the house." He said with a grin.

"Oh, I thought it might have something to do with the fact that I'm out here." I replied with a little sass.

"You know why I'm out here." He said as he steps into me and ask "Can I kiss you?"

"If you have to ask the answer will always be no." I replied as I stepped back and set down on the sofa. I know he was frustrated as he turned away from me and I wanted him to kiss me too. But I hate it when someone asks if they can kiss me. If you are going to do it--DO IT-- don't ask permission. "So your not going to talk to me now?" I asked.

He turned back towards me and said "You are a hard person to figure out, I want so bad to kiss you and I thought you wanted that too but then you rejected me. You are so aggravating!"

I held out my hand, "Come here, I did not reject you. I just said that you need not ask to kiss me."

He walked toward me with a stunned look on his face. "Oh!" He said as he sat beside me.

As he sat down I slid my hand along the outside of his leg. He watched my hand move up his thigh in amazement. I took my other hand and slid it slowly up his chest tracing every curve, every muscle until I got to his neck. Then I took him firmly by the back of the neck and pulled him to me and kissed him like he had never been kissed before. He put his hand on my leg and started to move it up nervously. I put my hand on his to steady it and let him know it was okay. I slid closer to him with one leg in front and one leg behind him. As he slid his hand under my sun dress he pulled back in shock. "No panties!" He said excitedly.

"Never!" I exclaimed. "So what do you want to do about this knowledge?" I asked in anticipation.

He leaned back into the kiss but with a little more aggression. I pulled my lips away just slightly and said "I need something cold, I'll be right back." I snuck into the house for ice and soda and when I came back out he was sitting under my sheet on my sofa all cocky. I handed him a soda and pulled back the sheet to find him naked. I popped ice in my mouth and started to lick his chest with the ice and watched the goose bumps rise all over. I licked him all over until my tongue was numb then I slid across him, he raised my skirt and I slowly slid down over his shaft. He was so hard. A little at first just to tease; then all the way down. He put his arms around me and kissed me I could feel the cold from his soda bottle on the small of my back. I arched my back to move away from it but he kept the bottle against my back and slid it all the way up. My nipple got so hard from the cold. He put down the soda to take a hold of me. He had a nice firm hold on my hips as I slid up and down his amazingly firm shaft.

He slid the straps of my dress down, kisses my chest, and bites my nipples. Then with just a little cold shock; he returned the favor with the ice. He licked the ice over one nipple then the other, as he melted the ice on my skin, he would let the cold water run down my body. We are in a constant rhythm with his hands on my hips pulling me down harder and harder. I moan a little and tighten up around his very ample cock as I ride him like stallion. He starts to moan a little louder than he should so I put my hand over his mouth then pull him in and kiss him as we finish with a major orgasm at the same time. I could feel his muscles tremble as I started to get up. He pulled me back to him, rolled me over, and pinned me, and kissed me. "That dropped the temp out here just a bit!" He said with a grin on his face.

"I'd say so!" I replies with a smile.

We just layed there and talked into the night like nothing in the world mattered. We didn't even notice the heat at that point. We just liked each others company. Our hands wandered along each others bodies for hours as we talked until talking turned back into kissing and then into more again. We had traced every inch of one an others bodies as the hours had passed, we were familiar with every spot that would make the other squirm.

I reached for my soda on the table at the other end of the sofa when I felt his hand run across my back. I took a drink of my soda and put it down. I felt him kiss my back and slide his hands up my back and down around the front over the sheet I was still half wrapped in. His kisses were so soft and tender. I could feel him getting hard through the sheet as he pressed against me and kissed my neck. No words were needed, I loosened the sheet and let it fall to the sofa. I turned enough to kiss him just before feeling his hard cock rub against the inside of my thigh. He guided it into me slightly. Just the head at first, with one of his hands on my hip and the other on my back. I arch my back as he grabs my hips and pulls me to him sliding all of himself into me. We watch our reflection in the window as he fucks me from behind. That turns us on even more. I have a hold of one of my breast, rolling the nipple between my fingers, making my nipple pop into a nice little button. My other hand is steadying us against the arm of the sofa. I hear an "Oh My God!!" as I put my nipple into my mouth. He watches intently as he goes in and out of me.

He puts one foot on the floor for more leverage and turns me a little. He grabs a hold of my breasts, biting, kissing, licking my back... he slides in and out of me with such determination. I feel myself letting go repeatedly, he had lost any ability he had to control himself. He grabs my hips and just pulls me against him again and again, my back arched. My ability to remain quiet is quickly diminishing. He is so in control, so confident as he holds onto me. I start to moan a little, he reaches around and places his hand over my mouth and says "Shhh!" I arched my back and rocked into him faster, he pulled me tighter. I felt him cum inside of me and it intensified my orgasm. I felt that scream but couldn't let it out. We layed back down on the sofa and finished a soda before he got dressed and went back in the house.

There was nothing between us but the night as we found a new way to deal with the heat...Night after night.